more concise

Many candidates employ a similar strategy, and by now Harris should have more concise answers to offer.

Van Jones on CNN was more concise.

This wasn’t a major issue in this interview, but she will need to craft a more concise explanation of how she intends to make life more affordable for ordinary, working Americans if she wants her message on the economy to land.

In my music, I tend to be a bit more concise and straight to the point; I would expand a bit more if I was writing a short story or a novel.

You can say, rewrite this to be more professional or more friendly or more concise.